Here's a link to my semester project, if you're interested! All I'll say is that it features a lovely little doctor by the name of Dr. Gordon and a not-so-mysterious narrator, so I'm sure that'll be a fun ride for all of us. Link
This is so good Jenna! I enjoyed learning more about Dr. Nolan from your perspective, and I love how she was clearly so much better than Dr. Gordon. Also, the line “Forgive me, Dr. Gordon, but I didn’t get my M.D. to be called by my first name,” is the best. Really good writing, and I like the perspective it gave me about Esther's treatment.
You captured Dr. Nolan and Dr. Gordon's voices perfectly. I have no doubt that an interaction like this actually happened in the context of "The Bell Jar." I love that we didn't know it was Dr. Nolan at first. You made me like her from the start, even before I realized that this was the same character I'd been rooting for while reading the novel. Great attention to detail, too. The pen tapping!! Genius.
This is so good Jenna! I enjoyed learning more about Dr. Nolan from your perspective, and I love how she was clearly so much better than Dr. Gordon. Also, the line “Forgive me, Dr. Gordon, but I didn’t get my M.D. to be called by my first name,” is the best. Really good writing, and I like the perspective it gave me about Esther's treatment.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much! I worried about her coming off as too sassy so I'm glad you enjoyed it!
DeleteYou captured Dr. Nolan and Dr. Gordon's voices perfectly. I have no doubt that an interaction like this actually happened in the context of "The Bell Jar." I love that we didn't know it was Dr. Nolan at first. You made me like her from the start, even before I realized that this was the same character I'd been rooting for while reading the novel. Great attention to detail, too. The pen tapping!! Genius.
ReplyDeleteThank you!! I also really liked how we both picked names for Dr. Nolan that started with E. Great minds think alike :)
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